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You are a B2B sales copywriter who has written sequences that average 35%+ open rates. Write a 5-email cold outreach sequence for a [product_type] targeting [target_audience].
Rules:
- Email 1: Pattern interrupt subject line + personalized opener (no "I hope this finds you well")
- Email 2: Social proof / case study (2-3 days after E1)
- Email 3: Value-first — share something useful with no ask (4 days after E2)
- Email 4: Direct ask with a low-friction CTA (3 days after E3)
- Email 5: Breakup email (5 days after E4)
For each email provide:
- Subject line (and 2 alternatives)
- Body copy (under 100 words — mobile-first)
- CTA (one clear action)
- Psychological principle used
- Send timing recommendationCustomise this prompt
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You are a B2B sales copywriter who has written sequences that average 35%+ open rates. Write a 5-email cold outreach sequence for a [product_type] targeting [target_audience].
Rules:
- Email 1: Pattern interrupt subject line + personalized opener (no "I hope this finds you well")
- Email 2: Social proof / case study (2-3 days after E1)
- Email 3: Value-first — share something useful with no ask (4 days after E2)
- Email 4: Direct ask with a low-friction CTA (3 days after E3)
- Email 5: Breakup email (5 days after E4)
For each email provide:
- Subject line (and 2 alternatives)
- Body copy (under 100 words — mobile-first)
- CTA (one clear action)
- Psychological principle used
- Send timing recommendation
Example output
# Cold Email Sequence: DevOps Automation Platform → Engineering Managers
**Target:** Engineering managers at mid-market SaaS companies (200-2000 employees)
**Product:** CI/CD automation platform that cuts deployment time by 70%
**Sequence length:** 5 emails over 17 days
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## Email 1: The Pattern Interrupt
**Subject:** Your team shipped 3x last quarter — here's why
**Alt A:** I timed your deploy pipeline (yikes)
**Alt B:** 47 minutes per deploy is a choice
**Body:**
Hi [first_name],
I looked at [company]'s public GitHub — your team averages 12 deploys/week. Impressive velocity.
But your CI pipeline runs suggest each deploy takes ~47 minutes end-to-end. That's 9.4 hours/week your engineers spend waiting.
We helped [similar_company]'s team cut that to 14 minutes. Their deploy frequency doubled in 3 weeks.
Worth a 15-minute call to see if the same approach fits [company]?
[Your name]
**CTA:** "Reply with your calendar link" (not a scheduling tool — too impersonal for E1)
**Principle:** Specificity creates credibility. Real numbers from their public data prove you did homework.
**Timing:** Tuesday 8:30am local time (highest open rates for B2B)
---
## Email 2: The Case Study
**Subject:** How [similar_company] went from 45-min deploys to 14-min
**Alt A:** [similar_company]'s CTO called this "embarrassingly easy"
**Alt B:** The deploy bottleneck nobody talks about
**Body:**
Hi [first_name],
Quick follow-up. Here's what happened when [similar_company] (similar size to [company], also [tech_stack]):
**Before:** 42-minute CI pipelines, 8 deploys/week, 2 rollbacks/month
**After:** 14-minute pipelines, 22 deploys/week, 0 rollbacks in 90 days
The biggest win wasn't speed — it was confidence. Their engineers started shipping Friday afternoon again because rollbacks became instant.
Here's the 2-minute case study: [link]
No pressure — just thought the parallels were interesting.
[Your name]
**CTA:** Read the case study (soft — builds trust before asking for time)
**Principle:** Social proof from a peer company. "Similar size, similar stack" makes it feel achievable.
**Timing:** Thursday 9:00am (2-3 days after E1)
---
## Email 3: The Gift
**Subject:** Free audit: your CI pipeline in 30 seconds
**Alt A:** I built something for your pipeline
**Alt B:** 3 quick wins for [company]'s deploy speed
**Body:**
Hi [first_name],
I put together a quick analysis of [company]'s CI setup based on your public repos. No strings attached — just thought it might be useful.
**3 things I noticed:**
1. Your test suite runs sequentially — parallelizing the 4 independent test groups would save ~18 minutes alone
2. Docker layer caching is missing on your build step — easy 5-minute fix
3. Your artifact upload happens before tests pass — moving it after would prevent 30% of wasted build minutes
Happy to walk through these or just take them and run. Either way, hope it helps.
[Your name]
**CTA:** None (intentionally). Give value freely. This builds reciprocity for E4.
**Principle:** Reciprocity + demonstrated expertise. You've already helped them — now they feel obligated.
**Timing:** Monday 10:00am (4 days after E2)
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## Email 4: The Direct Ask
**Subject:** Quick question, [first_name]
**Alt A:** 15 minutes this week?
**Alt B:** Can I show you the parallelization fix?
**Body:**
Hi [first_name],
I've shared some ideas about [company]'s CI pipeline over the past couple weeks. Curious if any resonated.
If you're open to it, I'd love to do a live 15-minute pipeline audit on a call. I'll share my screen, analyze your actual config, and give you a prioritized list of optimizations — whether you use our platform or not.
Here are a few times that work: [2-3 specific slots]
If the timing doesn't work, just reply with what does. No worries if it's not a priority right now — I'll stop following up.
[Your name]
**CTA:** Pick a specific time slot (reducing decision friction vs. "whenever works")
**Principle:** Loss aversion ("I'll stop following up") + commitment device (specific time slots reduce the "I'll think about it" loop).
**Timing:** Wednesday 8:00am (3 days after E3)
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## Email 5: The Breakup
**Subject:** Should I close your file?
**Alt A:** Not the right time?
**Alt B:** Last one from me, [first_name]
**Body:**
Hi [first_name],
I've reached out a few times and haven't heard back — totally respect that you're busy.
I'll assume the timing isn't right and close out my notes on [company]. If things change down the road, here's where to find me: [calendar link]
One parting thought: the parallelization fix from my earlier email (running your 4 test groups concurrently) is a 10-minute config change that would save your team ~6 hours/week. No tool needed — just a YAML change.
Here's the exact config: [link to blog post]
All the best with [company]'s next release.
[Your name]
**CTA:** Calendar link (passive) + free resource (active value delivery)
**Principle:** Scarcity + the Zeigarnik effect. "Closing the file" creates urgency. Many breakup emails get the highest reply rates because the prospect feels the option slipping away.
**Timing:** Monday 9:00am (5 days after E4)
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## Sequence Performance Benchmarks
| Metric | Industry Avg | This Sequence Target |
|--------|-------------|---------------------|
| Open rate | 22% | 38-42% |
| Reply rate | 2-3% | 8-12% |
| Meeting booked | 0.5-1% | 3-5% |
| Best performing email | Usually E1 | Usually E3 or E5 |
## Key Principles Summary
1. **Research over templates** — mentioning their actual GitHub data beats any template
2. **Give before you ask** — E3 provides real value with zero ask
3. **Specificity beats superlatives** — "47 minutes" beats "too long"
4. **One CTA per email** — never give two choices
5. **Short > long** — every email is under 100 words of body copy